What to say.. when the whole things r being silent..just to xtremlly sorry to myself..
संकटकालको घडी यो
आज हो कि भोलि हो
एक त्यान्द्रो साँसमा जो
भविश्य मेरो टिकेको
यो भोक नै यस्तो हो
बेस्कन च्यापिदिने
आँखा अघी अन्धकार छायो
अनी, जताततै बहकिदिने
म त निश्छल नै थिए
यो भोक जाग्रित गराउने तिमी व्यभिचारी
अनी भोकलाई नशा नशामा पुर्याइ
बाटो बिराउन वाध्य गराउने हे ईश्वर ! तिमी अपराधी
म संघर्शरत थिए
आत्म अस्तित्व बचाव निम्ती
दु:खक दिन सकिएकै थिएनन्
यो HIV किन, के क लागि ????
जब लडाउनु नै थियो त
हिंड्न सिकायौ किन ?
थच्चिएकै थियो जिन्दगी
वामे सर्न सिकायौ किन ?
आँखा थियो सपना बिहिन
यात्रा मेरो जिर्ण अनी कठिन
एक आँखा स्वप्निल संसार सजाँउदै थियो
भविश्य कल्पिइकन
अर्को आँखा भिजिदै थियो
थाहा नै नपाईकन
थियो निस्सासिदो गोरेटो अनी थकाईपूर्ण जिन्दगी
न आड न भरोसा केही
कल्पनाका उडान लिई
भर्खर त जिउन सिकिदै थियो
अनायसै म HIV +VE
किन, अनी के का लागि ????
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Hello buddy,
That was a nice poem. But still i want to comment on it the other way. Well, when we express something in POETRY
, basically we don’t use exactly say “HIV” when we write poem on it. It would be OK if used on the “topic” as you have done, but can’t we just express the feelings and make readers tell that we are talking about HIV?? That is the way how we express in poetry.
The other thing is hay, alikati pessimistic bhayena ra ? (As you use to tell me)
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अमेत्य:
के हो कुरो, अलि प्रष्ट भएन नि !
कविता मा म भनेर सम्बोधन गरिएको छ ।
यो कविता मात्रै हो कि, कथा पनि ????
अनायसै म HIV +VE
किन, अनी के का लागि ????
ke ho?
it is heart touching poem.but it is different…i want to consult about it…my eyes searching you..where are you???
Nice Poem, though lil obscure
Namaste,
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where are you now days????
Hi to all,
I used to writed poem involving ” I ” means ” म ” and try to feel the character involved in the poem as myself …..That’s why feeling the HIV +VE guy as myself i have created this….and some of my friend really thought that , is something happened with Ametya ????
what does a HIV +VE person do feel ??? I think he exactly feel the same above if he just took the wrong direction forcefully …..forcefully by the mean if the apetition (sex, satisfaction, emotion, love etc) do dominate him though he trying to control them ….
It’s very hard to endure the inevitable death.